love untainted...

as i burn down all the bridges
linked up to my past
i don't feel anymore lighter
then i should have,
instead,
the presence of absence
deep inside of me
makes the pain heavier to bear
and i can't stop
thinking of,
all the times we had
when crying was never an option
and laughing was genuine
when company was,
taken for granted,
and love,
was all we had 


to be continued...

Comments

  1. I love it when there's that happy feeling that you have.
    The warm and fuzzy one :P

    And you're right, I have to wait and trust Allah :)

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  2. Bittersweet works coming from you once again...They are amazing as always! =) ..and umm here is my take on the leftover part.


    ...how broken i felt when i was proved wrong,
    your sin, you had commited once more,
    promises broken,
    trust shattered,
    poisoned by the hand,
    i vowed to never let go,
    burned by the fire,
    i had kindled in my heart,
    they say,
    from the ashes i must rise again,
    but how can i,
    without the glow they are just dust,
    somberly i wait,
    for the wind to carry them away,
    to settle them somewhere new,
    somewhere,
    someone else,
    might give them life again,
    still i will hope it might be you,
    'cuz for you,
    mine is...a love untainted!


    =)

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  3. beautiful...esp,
    "burnt by the fire, i had kindled in my heart, they say,
    from the ashes i must rise again,
    but how can i?
    without the glow,
    they are just dust...<3

    and thanks, for the compliment, not the one you gave me, but the poem with which you complimented my poem...
    loved it.
    and plz,
    t.c

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  4. @ovais..
    yeah...you need to:)
    glad you grasped my point :)

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