Escape


Thinking of a happy place
I am trying to escape,
This life’s fast pace
But my mind is in disgrace
I feel so misplaced
Forgot what I started with, forgot my base

And now I hesitate
I frown and I hate
I want to find an opening 
I want to find your face

But I think its too late
Because,
Though all this time I have been,
Trying to erase.
And all this time I have been,
Trying to replace
But you have left me so dazed
I am so lost in this maze

I want to find an opening, 
I want to find another way

Because I get stuck halfway
When I think about those days
And feel you slip away
I want to have the old you
But then I see you go your way

I am desperate to find an opening
To find an exit gate.


p.s: i know this piece is a little raw, but i tried so hard to fair it out, it didnt work, i guess words aren't enough to describe how i really felt while writing this.

Comments

  1. Never Know Me5 November 2011 at 12:29

    This so clearly explains your state of mind. It's a painful piece. But dont fear, everything will work out! :)

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  2. ..the floodgate of feelings..:]5 November 2011 at 22:36

    yeah they will I.A...<3 i have faith in this person...blind faith...<3 :)
    thanks:)

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  3. ateeq mughal9 November 2011 at 02:04

    u think thats raw,
    lol that's smack down, :P
    and in line number 18, u wrote maize, just delete i from it. :D

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  4. ..the floodgate of feelings..:]9 November 2011 at 07:21

    hahaha:P...awww thankyou...yeah it seems kinda raw to me:P

    hahaah ooppp...thnxs:D i was always bad at spellings :P

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  5. Aliza Khan9 November 2011 at 09:16

    Woww!!! Seriously dude if u think this is raw then I wonder how the So-NOT-RAW piece is going to be :D

    Its Awsm :D

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  6. Aliza9 November 2011 at 10:21

    This could be a song,you know? Everything rhymed SO perfectly (:

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  7. ..the floodgate of feelings..:]9 November 2011 at 10:28

    @alyza..aww thanx:)

    @prettylicious...i wanted it to be a song...i just need sm1 to compose it for me:)

    ReplyDelete

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