Reflection...






looked in the reflection...
saw u in pain..
saw an emblem.. of the past
which is just so hard to explain..

i break the mirror..
and i am blinded by tears..
waves of guilt cross over
my tormented soul,
the endless queries..
shower in my wits..

can i not assist?
am i a hinderance?
is this de ja vu?
or is it poles apart?

i wish ur sores to be over..
i wish you to just trust me..
because i know..

the map of your present path..
its the map..which has been engraved in my mind
because once..
i was walking
down the same conduit,
and once the same stones hit me..
and because once..i fell down right where you are standing
and that one day..you had come along to rescue me..

now its my turn..
ill pick you up..
on the same track..
where i once..,
broke down..!! 

p.s: something once written by me, it was written before i realized...that i did help, not by doing something for you. but just by always being there...:)

Comments

  1. ateeq mughal27 August 2011 at 20:02

    <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3..
    there weren't more hearts available in hospitals so i am gonna import some and then put them here :D

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  2. Ridx 27 August 2011 at 21:31

    Beautiful :D

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  3. Ovais27 August 2011 at 23:59

    AWesome!!

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  4. Voice Of Reason28 August 2011 at 00:15

    Wow.
    You know, your blog just might make me open to falling in love again.

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  5. ..the floodgate of feelings..:]28 August 2011 at 00:53

    @ ateeq, girl who belived in angels,rids and ovais...thanx:)

    @aaishah...it would be a great honour for me if tat happens:):D

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  6. äмän ♥28 August 2011 at 00:56

    This is awesome <3<3<3 Lovely Blog. =) looking forward to read more .
    And thanks for visiting my blog and following me :)
    Following you too =)

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  7. Anonymous28 August 2011 at 01:40

    And once again, I'm at a loss for words. This is a beautifully breathtaking poem! <3 :)'

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  8. A lost wanderer28 August 2011 at 02:06

    You, miss, are a wonderful poet...
    It's a beautiful piece of poetry... :)

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  9. Angelique28 August 2011 at 02:53

    I love your posts!

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  10. fatima28 August 2011 at 03:04

    it is beautiful
    seriously!
    n pretttty blog =)

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  11. Angelindistress28 August 2011 at 03:38

    beautiful blog..u have expressed it so beautifully..loving it..:)

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  12. Curl Jung28 August 2011 at 04:14

    Wow.
    ♥Love-able♥ post@!
    Kudos.

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  13. ..the floodgate of feelings..:]28 August 2011 at 04:18

    @ aman: thnx:)...you will you will...go to my older blogs, there is more poetry there:)
    @hafsa: thnx:D
    @ alost waderer: thnku:PPPPPPPP
    @ taytay: awww:) thnx:)
    @fatima: thnkuuu:)
    @angel in distress: ...:) thnx for following my blog:)

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  14. ..the floodgate of feelings..:]28 August 2011 at 04:21

    @hamza :) thnku...it was written out of love:)

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  15. Love ( Founder YUP/ Enlive.Inn)28 August 2011 at 07:42

    i am so glad i finally gave in to ur plight and came over... i surely wud have missed on someone truly awesome...

    thanx for being pushy... wat i am reading is beautiful... and have got to be one hell of a beautiful person...

    love u:D

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  16. ..the floodgate of feelings..:]28 August 2011 at 08:15

    :D hahaha thanks... :P i didnt mean to be pushy though!:D

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  17. MAHNOOR28 August 2011 at 09:16

    awesome =D

    just like alwaysss

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  18. All She Wrote29 August 2011 at 03:07

    So heart-melting!and way awesome <3 <3 :D:D
    Post more!:P :P

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